Not bad
I liked how you used some explanations in the beggining to cover some of the parts. The only problem I had were the rips, try to get rips from a better site or get an updated vesion a flash, because the rips looked a little sketchy, sometimes when you submit it things turn out like that.
This was better than the first one, but a suggestion would be moving backrounds. Just save the animation to your library, take it out, and use it like normal. Good job, this was an enjoyable little movie, better than normal sprite flashes.